On writing a poem...
I scribbled down lines
of feeble hopes
and romantic delusions.
But each time, I ended up
with mere fleeting images
and confused allusions.
I penned my thoughts
but words do not capture
that silent leap of the heart
and that moment of pleasure
from a smile.
So, I quit writing the poem.
Just then, the poem scribbled down
its own lines and rhythm,
slowly painting the image
i’ve tried so hard to create.
Serenading me with the
sweet symphony of
words, meek and unadorned;
Like when you say
“i love you”
without
the accompaniment of
a guitar, beneath
a starless sky.
p.s.: this is a poem that i wrote more or less a couple of years ago (2006). sorry for the mushy content, it was intended to be a love poem. *rolls eyes*


1 Comments:
"Like when you say “i love you ”without
the accompaniment of a guitar, beneath a starless sky." - this is very lonely. why say i love you beneath a starless sky? nevetheless. the poem is just that good, improve it more.
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